Swaying in the wind
The trees tower over you
They reach at the sky
Grass does not cover all
Some parts are green, some are not
It goes poke, poke, poke
Sunday, 20 July 2008
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Welcome to the online space of the creative writing group at St Bartholomew's School, Newbury. If all goes according to plan, the next few months should see a range of postings from the students. Hope you enjoy them, and please do feel free to comment as you see fit, whether you know us or not - that's the whole point of this stuff being here, after all. Obviously, all material here remains the copyright of the original authors. Any enquiries should be made to me at gevans@stbarts.co.uk. Ta.
1 comment:
I love the first stanza, it suggests to me a feeling of discomfort or even muted horror at the tall trees and makes me wonder why that would be. I love it when a Haiku tells more than one story, great work!
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